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SATYR 2 by Yayashin SATYR 2 by Yayashin
Illustration for "Legend of cryptids." Applibot inc.
Satyr advanced version card.
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Given 2013-01-03
SATYR 2 by *Yayashin ( Featured by vowbreaker )
:iconrazwit:
There is one major flaw in this piece, which is the far leg of the satyr. It's missing a segment, which looks strange even without the comparison of the other leg, but even more so with it. The line you currently have with the leg is good for moving the eye around the page, so keep that in mind if and when you add the appropriate section to the leg. Also, the upper portion of that leg, near the arm, is simultaneously in front and behind the arm. adding some fur in front of the arm will fix that easily.
These are the only major flaws though, and I feel the image is extremely successful otherwise. Great job!

(also, I apologize for posting this in the normal comments first. I don't critique on DA often, and didn't know I needed to click the "Write a crit" button)
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Same as the first critique. The left leg is bent opposite that the joint is supposed to go. The right leg looks great. I understand what pose you wanted to achieve, but it's hard to get that pose with an animal leg. And I don't have any ideas to fill in that area with his leg, because his leg wouldn't be able to bend like that. Only the hip... I You could re-position the leg and try adding another object in that corner to balance. Love to see more of your work though! That is the only thing that catches my eye, everything else is gorgeous! The women are gorgeous, and the color is amazing! I love the oranges and blues are reds. It's very vibrant, but dark as well. The texture and lighting are used well too! :)
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Grey8Wolf Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013  Professional Photographer
Very nice work!!
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:iconninjadnice:
ninjadnice Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
Reminds me of the truly free ending in Cathrine
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:iconemiliechapman:
emiliechapman Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
...the leg....OCD taking over...
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:iconginryuzaki:
Ginryuzaki Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
impressive work!! :iconwowplz: congrats on DD!! :iconiloveyouplz:
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:icontheandro:
theandro Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
what if.... his leg is LIKE THIS. Would you ask a guy in the wheelchair, why his leg is looking wrong?
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Ellipsis615 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
DAY-YUM!! Now that is a hot mythical being!
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engelszorn Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Professional General Artist
Some may and I don't see any offense with that. The leg is wrong and unless the artist provides further info, that's what people see. Again, no problem talking about it.
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Kiki20012 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
love it
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:iconghost-messorem:
Ghost-Messorem Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student General Artist
XXXXD i play that game on my ipod all the time, i'm glad to find someone who makes the art
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zahuranecs Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pimp Satyr... Nuff said.
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