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SATYR 2 by Yayashin SATYR 2 by Yayashin
Illustration for "Legend of cryptids." Applibot inc.
Satyr advanced version card.
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Given 2013-01-03
SATYR 2 by *Yayashin ( Featured by Kenny-Winker )
:iconrazwit:
There is one major flaw in this piece, which is the far leg of the satyr. It's missing a segment, which looks strange even without the comparison of the other leg, but even more so with it. The line you currently have with the leg is good for moving the eye around the page, so keep that in mind if and when you add the appropriate section to the leg. Also, the upper portion of that leg, near the arm, is simultaneously in front and behind the arm. adding some fur in front of the arm will fix that easily.
These are the only major flaws though, and I feel the image is extremely successful otherwise. Great job!

(also, I apologize for posting this in the normal comments first. I don't critique on DA often, and didn't know I needed to click the "Write a crit" button)
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Same as the first critique. The left leg is bent opposite that the joint is supposed to go. The right leg looks great. I understand what pose you wanted to achieve, but it's hard to get that pose with an animal leg. And I don't have any ideas to fill in that area with his leg, because his leg wouldn't be able to bend like that. Only the hip... I You could re-position the leg and try adding another object in that corner to balance. Love to see more of your work though! That is the only thing that catches my eye, everything else is gorgeous! The women are gorgeous, and the color is amazing! I love the oranges and blues are reds. It's very vibrant, but dark as well. The texture and lighting are used well too! :)
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:iconchaoticgirl:
chaoticgirl Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
reminds of dinners for smucks...that weird model guy o.O
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:iconanimalisticsoulmix:
AnimalisticSoulMix Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist
It's nice! :D But, pardon me, but what's up with his leg? Why is it the ankle AND the knee?
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:iconpower-girl-fan:
Power-Girl-Fan Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
it's Mr. Tumnus from The Lion, The Witch and the Wardrobe gone badass :P
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:iconcg-gabe:
CG-Gabe Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013   General Artist
This is icredible :jawdrop:
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:iconlhuneart:
LhuneArt Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
What is.. What's going on with that leg o.o You broke his ankle forward.

Beautiful image but that leg really threw me off. With all that beautiful rendering I'm not sure how you missed something so fundamental if I'm completley honest.
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:iconan-ageless-creature:
an-ageless-creature Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Love this. Love the romantic elements along with your tones/colouration. Beautiful :)
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:iconkeemventura92:
KeemVentura92 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
realistic
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:iconmomohinamoru:
MomoHinamoru Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student Artist
the guy looks like loki in the other daily devation
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:icondarklordcl:
darklordcl Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
Very nice work, great use of the contrasting colors going from bottom to top, and the shadowing makes me feel like I am in the dark forest with them. razwit has already pointed out the limb problems, but otherwise a very fine work.

BTW... your satyr has Brad Pitt's facial features.
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:iconaerikzuriel:
Aerikzuriel Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
love it...it is marvelous!!!!!
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:iconaerikzuriel:
Aerikzuriel Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
love it...it is marvelous!!!!!
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:iconsoovigon:
soovigon Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Professional Filmographer
WoW!!!!!!!!!!!! Without words!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icondrimr:
Drimr Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cool! :-o
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:iconvasilis-kun:
Vasilis-Kun Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
Nice! remember me Brad Pitt!
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:iconyayashin:
Yayashin Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Wow !!! thanks a lot for DD, it's a very nice gift to begin this year ;)
thanks all for comments ;)
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:iconlostgryphin:
LostGryphin Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Amazing details, colors and textures - congrats on the DD
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:iconoscarliima:
Oscarliima Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cool your wolk
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:icontrafalmadoriane:
Trafalmadoriane Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lovely!
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:iconnakuchan9095:
nakuchan9095 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG! It's brilliant!! It's perfect! I love it!
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:iconc3ntric:
C3NTRIC Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Wonderful <3
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:iconburgald:
Burgald Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
So AWESOME!!!!! :D
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:iconpraiphex:
Praiphex Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
i like this :)
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:iconstarts-at-zero:
Starts-At-Zero Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I want this card soo bad! I love the details in this piece!
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:iconlostusaslambus:
LostusAsLambus Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It looks really great. Your satyr looks kind of like Brad Pitt. ^_^
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:iconbol101:
bol101 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
nice
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:iconrammcutegirl:
Rammcutegirl Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh Mein Gott this is so cool
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:icontori-34:
Tori-34 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahhh, he looks great :3
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:iconbibiarts:
BiBiARTs Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Congrats on your DD, well deserved from me and your group :iconsoulcollectors:
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:iconklodia007:
Klodia007 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Professional General Artist
It is fantastic!!!!!!!!
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:iconsheart123:
sheArt123 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
WOW!
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:iconlintu47:
lintu47 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the well deserved DD! :heart:
Have a nice day and Happy New Year! :holly:
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:iconicchy92:
icchy92 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
Wow very nice work!
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:iconkungfoowiz:
kungfoowiz Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
Looks a bit like Brad Pitt =) Cool piece =)
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:iconbunnykissd:
bunnykissd Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I thought the same thing! From Interview with a Vampire! Such a great piece!
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:iconlaticis:
Laticis Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Stunning.
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:iconukrainian-angora:
Ukrainian-Angora Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Such attention to detail! What fantastic work!
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:iconnancy-keenobie:
nancy-keenobie Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
beautiful
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:iconsupermarioart:
supermarioART Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing!Great composition,detail and contrast between colors!Congrats!;-)
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:iconcarudo:
Carudo Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really hated killing this guys in Titan Quest.
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:iconccaffeine:
ccaffeine Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
This is amazing :heart:
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:iconrazwit:
razwit Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
There is one major flaw in this piece, which is the far leg of the satyr. It's missing a segment, which looks strange even without the comparison of the other leg, but even more so with it. The line you currently have with the leg is good for moving the eye around the page, so keep that in mind if and when you add the appropriate section to the leg. Also, the upper portion of that leg, near the arm, is simultaneously in front and behind the arm. adding some fur in front of the arm will fix that easily.
These are the only major flaws though, and I feel the image is extremely successful otherwise. Great job!
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:iconinkworthy:
InkWorthy Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
You're right on all counts! I'm sure the artist can fix these quite easily!
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:iconrajasegar:
rajasegar Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great piece of work!!
Thanks for sharing...
Featured in Daily Inspirations at hangaroundtheweb.com
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:iconcorruptedcross:
Corruptedcross Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
it would appear, Satyrs always get the bitches...
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:iconavdsouza:
avdsouza Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
LORD PĂ!
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:iconhiram67:
hiram67 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This beautiful work has been featured in my journal [link] :)
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:iconthandav:
thandav Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Professional General Artist
awesome
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:iconmisswinchester88:
MissWinchester88 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
Wow!! love it!
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:iconmea00:
mea00 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice work!
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:iconkurtzan:
Kurtzan Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hi ! Your great work is featuring here : [link]
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